Good job
Okay, constructive crit is gonna hit you in the face. The bass was really repetitive and at some point it was really filled with resonant freqs. You should allways EQ those out. The snare should be punchier IMO, I like my snares to hit me in the face. Vocals need better processing, eg. lotso delay and reverb + stereo separation :D
Other than that, it's awesome :)